[ESP+ENG] La bella de la poza / The beauty of the pool (Relato/Story) Folklore

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Versión en Español:

La bella de la poza

Muy risueña la bella y joven mujer se despide de su marido que estaba trabajando en el conuco familiar, ella se va canturrreando por la vereda rumbo a un río cercano, le encantaba refrescarse tomando por las tardes un baño en una poza enorme y profunda que allí se encontraba, de camino al río vio a un amigo de su esposo, era el viejo Simón que andaba con su botella de ron en la mano como casi siempre, estaba recostado de una mata de mango, pero el no se percato de que ella lo había visto, pues no le devolvió el saludo que la mujer le hizo, -¿que extraño, en que andará por estos lados el viejo Simón?- se pregunta la joven.

Llegando al río, los rayos del sol calentaba su piel, mientras la brisa le refrescaba el cuerpo, sin muchos miramientos no dudo en despojarse de sus ropas, pues ella no solo había ido a admirar el paisaje, le gustaba darse su refrescante baño completamente desnuda, en aquella inmensa poza, antes de lanzarse al agua encontró una bella flor de chupa chupa, colocándosela en el pelo muy coqueta aumentaba aun mas su belleza como si eso fuera posible, no solo era joven y buena moza, ademas tenía dos pepas de ojos color verde esmeralda que eran el delirio de su esposo y unos cuantos hombres mas, entre ellos el viejo Simón.

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Ya despojada de su vestido se subió a una gran piedra para lanzarse desde allí haciendo un atlético clavado hasta el agua, entro perfecta al agua y emergió unos pocos segundos después, risueña como era su carácter disfrutando del agua, la naturaleza y la belleza de aquella poza, se bañaba tranquila sin percatarse que no estaba sola, el condenado amigo de su esposo, el viejo Simón la admiraba desde lejos escondido detrás de unos los matorrales, el viejo disfrutaba de su belleza y su desnudez, Simón le daba un buen sorbo de ron a la botella, pero el no era el verdadero peligro que acechaba aquella tarde, en el recodo del río, un enorme Caimán mas grande que una cuadra, con mas cachos que un venado y con mas dientes que 20 babas, al detectar el chapoteo de la joven se introdujo en el agua sigilosamente sin que la bella se percatase.

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La joven chapoteaba en el agua despreocupada, mientras Simón escondido seguía disfrutando de las curvas de aquel hermoso cuerpo que no le pertenecía, entonces fue que Simón vio al feroz y enorme Caimán acercándose por el agua, sin el valor de ayudarla o delatarse avisándole del peligro el muy cobarde salió corriendo hacia el conuco, buscando a su amigo para avisarle del inmenso peligro que corría en la poza su mujer, cuando llego al conuco le contó rápidamente lo que acontecía en la poza, el amigo toma su escopeta, su machete y sale corriendo para el río, Simón lo sigue mas atrás, cuando llegaron a la poza ya era demasiado tarde.

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Ha un costado de la orilla el Caimán patas arriba parecía dormir de lo mas sabroso luego del banquete que se había dado, no habia rastros de su bella y joven esposa, Simón se apuro a darle el pésame a su pobre amigo, ofreciéndole la botella para que se tomara un trago en su memoria, pero el amigo lo rechazo, armo su escopeta bajo hasta la orilla decidido a darle muerte a la bestia en castigo por comerse a su mujer!!!, estaba a medio camino cuando la bella de ojos verdes color esmeralda emergió de la poza, con su enorme cuchillo en una mano y una piedra grande en la otra, que bajo a buscar hasta el fondo de la poza para ayudarse a destajar al Caimán que había matado minutos atrás.

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Fin.

Este relato corto, es la historia reversa de una famosa canción del folcklore Venezolano «Mercedes» a cargo del cantante y compositor Simón Diáz

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In English:

The beauty of the pool

Very smiling, the beautiful and young woman says goodbye to her husband who was working on the family farm, she goes humming along the sidewalk towards a nearby river, she loved to cool off by taking a bath in the afternoons in a huge and deep pool that there she was, on the way to the river she saw a friend of her husband's, it was old Simón who was walking around with his bottle of rum in his hand as he almost always was, he was leaning against a mango tree, but he didn't realize that she was looking at him. He had seen, because he did not return the greeting that the woman gave him, -how strange, how does old Simon walk around these parts?- the young woman wonders.

Arriving at the river, the sun's rays warmed her skin, while the breeze refreshed her body, without much regard, she did not hesitate to take off her clothes, because she had not only gone to admire the landscape, she liked to take her refreshing bath completely naked In that immense pool, before jumping into the water, she found a beautiful chupa chupa flower, placing it in her hair very flirtatiously, it increased her beauty even more as if that were possible, not only was she young and good-looking, she also had two dope eyes emerald green color that were the delirium of her husband and a few other men, including old Simon.

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Already stripped of her dress, she climbed a large stone to launch herself from there doing an athletic dive into the water, she entered the water perfectly and emerged a few seconds later, smiling as her character was, enjoying the water, nature and the beauty of that well, she bathed calmly without realizing that she was not alone, the damned friend of her husband, the old Simon admired her from afar hidden behind some bushes, the old man enjoyed her beauty and her nudity, Simon gave her a good sip of rum to the bottle, but he was not the real danger that lurked that afternoon, at the bend of the river, an enormous alligator larger than a block, with more horns than a deer, and with more teeth than 20 slimes, upon detecting the young woman's splash, it entered into the water stealthily without the beauty noticing.

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The young woman splashed carefree in the water, while hidden Simon continued to enjoy the curves of that beautiful body that did not belong to him, then it was that Simon saw the fierce and enormous Caiman approaching through the water, without the courage to help her or give himself away warning him of the danger The very coward ran towards the conuco, looking for his friend to warn him of the immense danger that his wife was running in the pool, when he arrived at the conuco he quickly told her what was happening in the pool, the friend took his shotgun, his machete and left running to the river, Simón follows him further back, when they arrived at the pool it was too late.

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On one side of the shore, the upside-down alligator seemed to be sleeping well after the banquet that had been given, there was no trace of his beautiful young wife, Simón hurried to offer his condolences to his poor friend, offering him the bottle to to have a drink in his memory, but the friend rejected him, armed his shotgun and went down to the shore determined to kill the beast as punishment for eating his wife!!! He was halfway there when the beautiful one with the eyes emerald-colored greens emerged from the pool, with his huge knife in one hand and a large stone in the other, which he went down to the bottom of the pool to help him cut off the alligator he had killed minutes before.

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End.

This short story is the reverse story of a famous Venezuelan folklore song «Mercedes» by the singer and composer Simón Díaz

Las imágenes:

Las bellas de la poza de 123rf.com
El primer caimán de https://sputniknews.lat/
El segundo caimán de https://www.pxfuel.com/

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  ·  2 years ago  ·  

jeje, excelente vuelta le has dado my friend. muy bueno!