Two of my shining stars on Blurt, @squirrelbait and @practicalthought, posted or commented about changing waterways regulations that have been most heavily affecting, as all new regulations seem to do, the common man, you and I. You and I and our brothers and sisters, our children, and our friends are being regulated up the wazoo, the arse, the behind.
@squirrelbait's post and a comment on it by @practicalthought, reminded me of this pre-covid and prescient story I wrote.
It is a glimpse of what our lives are likely to become if we don't fucking wake the fuck up right now.
I reproduce it for you all here. I hope you enjoy it. It's short!
The sisters waded as silently as possible into the pond in their back field. The night was very dark, and the water very warm. Nothing could see them. Both women smiled unseen and sighed unheard as they lowered their bodies into the water that was warmer even than the night air, then floated blissfully on their backs.
Both also hazily remembered the extravagant family picnics on the pond’s shores when they were young. One of their lambs would be going round on a makeshift spit. Relatives “for miles around” (as Georgi would say) came to spend the day eating, playing and swimming in that very pond.
Now the women only went there on the darkest nights of the year, and the windier those were, the better.
Georgi was long ago gone, but both the sisters could still hear their great aunt saying “This will all be taken away from us.” Georgi warned them their freedoms were fast eroding. She knew things. She flouted the law whenever she could, saying “There are too many laws.” She never missed a town board meeting, not one. Georgi was a rabble-rouser back then, the kind that would disappear today, like Jonah had.
Jonah often hunted for their food. He shot a rabbit on their very own property, but been hauled away for “discharging a weapon within the town limits” and never seen again. No one knew when the word “village” was changed to “town” in the local law code, but Jonah was the first arrested.
Not long ago the sisters were scrupulously careful to be law-abiding citizens, but that became impossible to do when the laws started changing regularly without warning.
Things worsened.
Farmer Joad was arrested for horseshit too close to a public road; using gas was forbidden, so Joad’s draft horse pulled a cart as he cleared his roadside, and it defecated.
Eunice was arrested for letting her ducks take a dip in her pond like she always had. But livestock was no longer allowed within 250 feet of any waterway so they’d taken Eunice and her ducks away that day, claiming she had risked polluting her own pond.
People hardly dared do anything outside their own houses anymore, not with satellite cameras recording their every move. Who knew when someone might be watching?
To go skinny dipping in their very own pond – and they had decades of tax payments to prove it was theirs – was extremely dangerous for the two women. Extremely. Only on windy new moon nights did they dare go there, ever since human activity of any kind had been forbidden within fifty feet of any waterway. The dark night was their cover, the wind their sound barrier, and the water their most guilty of pleasures.
Tonight they would allow themselves.
Tonight they would float and remember happier times with Georgi nearby.
Tonight they would be grateful for what little was left them, even if they had to break a few laws to enjoy it.
This photo, by @tristancarax, was the prompt:
The story was to be written in 31 sentences with word counts in this order:
14, 10, 4, 29, 16, 12, 21, 20, 24, 8, 3, 13, 9, 15, 6, 25, 22, 26, 2, 31, 17, 30, 18, 7, 28, 1, 27, 19, 5, 11, 23
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Very good - probably far closer to the truth than many would be comfortable in admitting. Death by a thousand cuts. Give them a chance and they'll charge you for breathing - actually, I think they're already working on that. lol
I wrote this Jan 13 2020, thinking it was well off into the future, but it's here in many ways. People are not ywt being dragged off their land never to be seen again, but the rest is happening. And disappearances of persons for breaking laws they had no idea existed might not be far behind for those of us in the US. Many of us assume it could never happen here.
That's the beauty of imagination - it is both timeless and if you allow it to flow, unrestrained by borders. :)
Yes I agree, I think this is all coming far faster than many realise. Come what may, I've made my peace and I'm ready for whatever is thrown at me. Have a lovely weekend my friend. :)
I definitely did some time traveling to write this one. Imagination is time travel. Memory is time travel. Future and past are the imaginings of the moment. We can create what we want in the world, without UFOs or computers or chips in brains.
I feel excited about what is to come. My belief in what is to come has shaped my life in surprising ways. It's about being open to the new ideas, dreaming and dreaming big.
We were charged air tax for daring to stay in a forest cabin here 3 years ago, EU rules, cunts.
You couldn't make it up!
Yep, they refused to hand over the key until I paid the climate tax for daring to stay in a forest full of bloody trees, even though I had pre paid for the log cabin.
huh? Poland charged you tax for the air?! What on earth?!
Indeed, when my mother came for a holiday, I pre paid but then got told no keys, no entry unless I paid a tax for fucking breathing there, excuse my language, it did anger me.
so wait. there's a climate tax if you camp out in a forest?
Indeed, courtesy of the EU bureaucrats,
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https://www.syracuse.com/realestate-news/2016/08/house_of_the_week_joe_biden_neilla_hunter_cayuga_county_scipio.html
https://engine.presearch.org/search?q=quantum+state+merge&r=1
https://www.grassley.senate.gov/news/remarks/the-biden-family-investigation_part-iii-james-biden
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Now you know where my Blurt handle comes from. I wonder if I ever had dealings with Bidens? Their place was just a few miles south of my family's. The story is set there. Thanks for all that info!
I got the same problem here in New Mexico with the Zoro Ranch up the road and a Governor who... Well... Let's just agree on publicity 🤬🥓
Really creative writing.
I like this line:
It seems to be in the appropriate place as so many shit laws are passed even the gas.
Real "Ownership" is in jeapordy or was it a myth from the start?
haha you like bodily function jokes? lol.
Thanks for stopping by!
That's life
This story reminds me of why I left London and my home of 12 years. It got so I felt you couldn't fart for getting a ticket. Things had changed so quickly since my younger days and it hasn't stopped speeding up either.
I loved the story apart from the burning lamb bit why did you have to have a dead lamb in there 😭
This story has a lot of truth in it, including that bit.
So I am buying the property that this story is set on. I feel a great deal of responsibility towards it, and intend to fight for it as best I can. I wanna be Georgi.
Have you found somewhere more free? 😢
Yup, more free than London. Away from towns and cities in the middle of nowhere, Ireland.
Oh yes, this short story goes along with the discussion perfectly!!! Can you add it as a comment so it's all together? I will also repost this post. Thanks much and yeah, good story. Makes the point. People are more apt to listen to the warnings now that we have all been proven right with the whole "pandemic" nonsense. Especially people in states like NY, Michigan, and California. Good story folks will remember.
I'll put a link into a comment on your post. Anecdotal evidence of what we are going through now has so much value!! I've been writing a lot of that, not meaning to, but it seems to be my mission, my personal instructions, to do so.
I was stunned with how much the story demonstrates the info in your post! Taxes, inheritance, land use, changing regulations, surveillance etc. It's almost as if I had written it in response to your post, but I looked back and I finished it on January 13, 2020. Before Covid was a word any of us had even heard. I thought I was writing about twenty years from now, but here we are.
I love this. That's the cool thing about this social media - Comments ADD value and additions like this add to the conversation. I love how fiction can poignantly express what we are feeling.
Your work is a passion, nice 1, shine on.
Yes it is, thank you for finding it so. Passion knows passion, the language of the heart.
One of my fav tunes, now dedicated to you :-)
I don't ever remember hearing this tune, and I'm sure I never saw this video. Really good stuff, both! Thanks!
Pink Floyd :-)
Oh gosh yes the old 31 sentences! What a challenge.
Literally me. 😂
This is a bit close to the truth I reckon. Breaks my heart. No wonder I long for a zombie apocalypse.
Darling, if you have time, would you read my latest story? No one who is fiction minded has read it on either platform. No hurry. 🙏💕😢
Which story are you talking about? I don't see one that is on both platforms and hasn't been read. No story should go unread!
It's called 'The Mushroom Hunters'
Thank you gorgeous! I'm sure it's been 'read' as in 'nice photo' .. :P