Ghosts

in haiku •  3 years ago 

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whispery beings
impermanent entities
doorways to our hearts

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This is my entry to a new haikucontest, on Blurt, hosted by @beelightfully. Please don't mistake the brevity of my poem for flippancy. I take haiku very seriously, and worked on this thing for a week! If you don't believe me, give haiku a go.


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  ·  2 years ago  ·  

I bet you did! I knew you were not absent but composing. I do like it without having to add the thematic word...much more subtle and echoey. This is rather poignant! And 'whispery' is such a lovely word.


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  ·  3 years ago  ·  

@rycharde likes this sort of thing.

Beautiful 😍 love it!! ❤️🙏

Just about to post regarding this weeks contest, really hope you will take part again 😊

  ·  2 years ago  ·  

This is sooo cool!