RE: The Good Girl

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The Good Girl

in blurtstory •  2 years ago 

You wrote an amazing story. For a second there, I thought a movie was playing and your voice could be heard in the background. You bring the reader into your imagination, to such a detail that it just leaves me speechless ... What is reality and what is your story ... 👏👏👏👏

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  ·  2 years ago  ·  

@deathsauron, how nice it is to see you drop by. It's really appreciated. And thanks for taking the time to read my story. Your comment really makes me happy - you're such a good writer yourself that this compliment means a lot. I'm glad I got her voice across well enough to get that effect. As for the details, I had one uni lecturer once that marked my work and said 'add detail so that the reader sees what you see' - that one comment really made a huge difference to how I write. I was so upset I got a low grade but his feedback made perfect, logical sense and I think I write better because of it.


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